Preliminary Exercise – Love Struck
My Preliminary Exercise show a short opening of a man
walking into the canteen to talk to his girlfriend/lover and get dumped/heartbroken
at the end. In my group, I deicide to work with Harpal, Vinisha and Harjio, we
all deicide to do a romance sequence and call it Love Struck, as we felt it was
right working with a boy and a girl, we felt the performance will be very interested
and also feel that the sequence would catch the audience attention.
Our Preliminary Exercise ‘Love Struck’ starts off with a man
walking toward a door outside the canteen. We first use a tilt up shot from
ground then move it up with a tripod, only showing the back of his shoes and trouser,
so the audience doesn't know who he is at first and what going on. I think that
we got the right shots in the exercise with the Match on Action was very good
as we got editing part it was very easy. We tried to use as many shots as we
can like tilt down shots, more close up of the characters and long shot of the
surround but we felt it was all right as it is, as it already has aspect of a
normal conversation using these shots like over the shoulder shots.
Two things I have learnt from our Preliminary exercise are
to make sure that we film in a quite and clean place. As in our performance it
was too noise and a lot of interruption, we should of film it somewhere else or
should have filmed it at another time; the audio was very bad, we found this
out after as we watch it after, as we were editing it, we couldn't very hear
any of the character talking in the performance. Also, we broke the 180 degree
rule in our performance, first we got it right when they are having the conversation
but broke it in the last two shots, when we shot the other side of the male
character face, which it look like he swap seat with the female character.
Moreover, the last shot of rose flowing down on the floor is
one of the best shots in the performance which to created an enigma code the audience
what to know what happen to the male character, as we slowed it down to make a
dramatic effective to the exercise, and it very easy in the editing part of the
exercise to do. Also the acting of both character were very good which is the
most important thing to get right for the performance, we needed to make sure
that it good to make sure that it engage the audience. The story is straight followed,
so the audience know what happen in the story. From where he walks to the door,
open it, walk through and seat down and start talking to the female character.
I felt that my group wear very good, as I would work with
them again in the future, as I learnt new techniques in the editing part like
make shots duration faster and slower, which would belief me in the future as I
make my own exercise, also would give me good ideas too.
Level 2: D
ReplyDeleteWWW: You make some good points in this evaluation - particularly with regards to the weaknesses.
EBI: Your written English is a concern at AS Level - there are far too many errors and this will cost you at the higher levels. You also need to provide more depth of analysis for your actual evaluation with detailed paragraphs that pick apart your practical work shot-by-shot. Also, check the enigma code reference - an enigma code leaves the audience guessing but the rose is clearly communicating the break-up.
LR: How did your pre-production work (script, storyboard, shot list) help contribute to the final product and what will you do differently for the real thing?